Wednesday, August 09, 2006

momentary loss/permanent loss

i was doing me
when you came through
and then i was doing you

until i remembered the song
from my soul's refrain
and then i was doing me again

without you

36 Comments:

Blogger Blu Jewel said...

I likes; I likes! Check out a story I posted in parts on http://thesaphyrelounge.blogspot.com.

I shared your site (the sex story one) with my girl and you had your screaming.

8/16/2006 9:53 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice! I like it!

8/17/2006 1:24 PM  
Blogger 1InTheSame said...

Good Stuff...you definitely got talent....

8/18/2006 9:57 AM  
Blogger Rose said...

This is great. It is my first visit here and I shall return...

8/27/2006 5:30 PM  
Blogger Let said...

i realy like this! Very nice

9/07/2006 8:14 PM  
Blogger blackcaesar said...

its a circle....

9/23/2006 10:21 PM  
Blogger Shai said...

Whew! That is all I can say.

10/17/2006 2:07 PM  
Blogger Xave said...

Time Machine

Given a choice I would certainly do you too.
Taken for a ride with you what else could I do?
If right were wrong and vice-versa, would it be an issue?
If left to chance wouldn’t you want me to screw
Tightly into your lyrical vibe until I had you
Loosely interpreting the meaning of taboo?
From your bedroom in Atlanta the portal gives a view
To a distant time and place where we could rendezvous.

.../...

See my fantasy dissolve as you begin to forget
Feel time pull you back to the present like a net
Smells the air around you and check if you are wet
Taste the champagne on your lips. Is it Taittinger or Moet?
Hear me say, “You look familiar, have we ever met?”

Respectfully yours,
Xavier

PS:
I would love to photograph you as you write.
But I would need a special lens to do it right.
A precision tool to better capture your tones
And catch every nuance of your self-inflicted Jones...
...from a distance

10/24/2006 1:18 PM  
Blogger DIVINE CULTURE; THE AKBAR SEED said...

It beez like dat. From every lesson, something is learned.

PEACE

www.divinecultureallah.blogspot.com

12/07/2006 3:33 PM  
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2/21/2007 11:17 PM  
Blogger Coko Mulan said...

Good stuff.. It's my first time.. i'm gonna take a look around..

5/04/2007 12:15 PM  
Blogger Saadia said...

Brilliant!!!

5/20/2007 11:50 AM  
Blogger Mizrepresent said...

Ditto /girly-Girl!

5/21/2007 7:04 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Finger-snaps and handclaps, lady! That was cold as ice!

5/26/2007 11:50 AM  
Blogger Xcentric Pryncess said...

love the poem....

8/23/2007 10:54 AM  
Blogger Mo said...

Ok, beauty. It's been a year since the last poetry post! You're starting to pick up my bad blogging habits :)

Anxiously awaiting your next poem,
SRae

8/25/2007 4:22 AM  
Blogger Don said...

Damnnnn...that was fierce.

10/05/2007 7:39 PM  
Blogger Rich Fitzgerald said...

I didn't know this site of you existed. I'm glad I found it. That was nice.

10/11/2007 7:38 PM  
Blogger danzer1986 said...

very nice. short and nice
**snooches**

p.s . i write on my blog too but just of my day to day happenings. but i am gona be publishing a book soon hehe

10/17/2007 11:21 AM  
Blogger danzer1986 said...

very nice. short and nice
**snooches**

p.s . i write on my blog too but just of my day to day happenings. but i am gona be publishing a book soon hehe

10/17/2007 11:21 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i really like this nikki... its great cos i feel as though i can actually SEE what you write... goodstuff

10/18/2007 10:42 AM  
Blogger Don said...

Darling Nik, hen are you going to allow comments again on the other?

11/14/2007 2:43 PM  
Blogger Babz Rawls Ivy said...

I love your style. You are a gem.
Love,
Babz

12/10/2007 8:31 PM  
Blogger TravelDiva said...

That's deep.

2/01/2008 1:57 PM  
Blogger Keisha "Kitten" Isaacs said...

Short and sweet! I dig it....peace

4/19/2008 12:58 PM  
Blogger Kiibaati said...

and the cycle continues...

7/12/2008 5:27 PM  
Blogger Dreamy said...

you know its so funny, i have visited your page before,lol

girl i so feel you on this poetry mami

been there done that

and wrote a post about it,lol

thanks for stopping by

7/29/2008 12:49 PM  
Blogger Still Patrice said...

short and sweet *snaps*

8/13/2008 7:48 PM  
Blogger -Q. said...

Nice, real nice..
-Q.

8/21/2008 4:14 PM  
Blogger Dyin_2_Fly said...

I really like this. I cam across your blog and thought i'd drop a line. I really like your style.

9/05/2008 2:23 PM  
Blogger Keli said...

I so needed to read these words right now...

9/23/2008 1:47 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow ...so powerful. I like those words.....I think I need to phrase that to someone

first time here, how are you?

10/03/2008 4:17 PM  
Blogger Mr.Socialight said...

I like this. Short and sweet. Do you, all the time.

10/29/2008 1:52 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

two thumbs up! nice work!

10/30/2008 2:48 PM  

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