he
flows like profound
notes composed
he knows I am
in.
love exposed
within prose
i have
words enclosed
disclosing
i am
open.
nose
too wide
i suppose
notes composed
he knows I am
in.
love exposed
within prose
i have
words enclosed
disclosing
i am
open.
nose
too wide
i suppose
posted by nikki at 10:54 PM
8 Comments:
"he knows I am
in, love exposed
within prose"
Damn, I hate that he knows...
mmm... this is good Nikki!!
I love reading poetry. I try to search out people with talent and learn from their prose.
You put things together in a very emotional way.
I'll definately be back.
Peace and Love.
when will u publish this girl
I always love word association and double connotations...good job!
I'm not usually a fan of poetry but this is good. Really good. Nose open wide, too wide.. yeah I've been there. Done that.
THAT was gorgeous
When you get a chance, tell me what you think about my heizeye&eyeamhim (Parts 1&2) posts
The Blog
The Message Board
e.
damn you for making me remember the time I felt like that.
I have been reading the pieces on your blog and i must say i am very impressed...bravo sista, bravo indeed.
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