ten lines
I wish I had at least nine lives
to experience each of the eight wonders
of your body at least seven times
licking each inch of it to within six degrees
of incineration as five fingertips
dive between four legs entangled...
so that the the meaning of
those three words are understood
as two spirits fold into
one
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here's the audio
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here's verseone's response. it didn't start off as a collab, but when i had him help me in the editing process, it was natural for the brotha to come up with a reply. spontaneous collaboration...
to experience each of the eight wonders
of your body at least seven times
licking each inch of it to within six degrees
of incineration as five fingertips
dive between four legs entangled...
so that the the meaning of
those three words are understood
as two spirits fold into
one
______________________________________________
here's the audio
______________________________________________
here's verseone's response. it didn't start off as a collab, but when i had him help me in the editing process, it was natural for the brotha to come up with a reply. spontaneous collaboration...
17 Comments:
I love both of your poems!
I didn't know that you had a separate blog from the one I usually go? Your voice sounds just like you look. :) You have a nice tone to your voice and I like the way that you read. Very nice.
Folk? You know you be snapping on this poetry. This don't make no sense. I don't have my headphones at my desk right now, so I'll be back. :)
i'm feelin' the voice recording. like stephen, its as i might have imagined it.
Peace.
you've found solace(soulace).
love your artform and the voice is great.
You are the best.....
The voice audio adds a classic touch to it!
You should do more of them for your poetry!
~Smooches~
send me an email, telling me how you uploaded that please!!!! i want to do that too....
The spoken words are even better!
that was nice. i like the reply. i dont usually come to this blog much but i think i will have to start.
Incredibly beautiful Nikki.
Just incredible.
Nikki, you stay killin' it, that's what fire feels like.
similar to what i amgine but not totally accurate.
still waiting...
you keep that up...
see what happens.
You voice is so pretty. I love it.
nice one. good stuff!
both poems are good poems...we all need to be in a cafe w/ the lights dim listening to that.....
Very cool design! Useful information. Go on!
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