Monday, January 30, 2006

ten lines

I wish I had at least nine lives
to experience each of the eight wonders
of your body at least seven times
licking each inch of it to within six degrees
of incineration as five fingertips
dive between four legs entangled...
so that the the meaning of
those three words are understood
as two spirits fold into
one
______________________________________________
here's the audio
______________________________________________

here's verseone's response. it didn't start off as a collab, but when i had him help me in the editing process, it was natural for the brotha to come up with a reply. spontaneous collaboration...

17 Comments:

Blogger Superstar Nic said...

I love both of your poems!

1/30/2006 10:34 PM  
Blogger Stephen A. Bess said...

I didn't know that you had a separate blog from the one I usually go? Your voice sounds just like you look. :) You have a nice tone to your voice and I like the way that you read. Very nice.

1/31/2006 12:30 PM  
Blogger MZPEACH said...

Folk? You know you be snapping on this poetry. This don't make no sense. I don't have my headphones at my desk right now, so I'll be back. :)

1/31/2006 12:57 PM  
Blogger VerseOne said...

i'm feelin' the voice recording. like stephen, its as i might have imagined it.

Peace.

1/31/2006 1:15 PM  
Blogger T said...

you've found solace(soulace).
love your artform and the voice is great.

1/31/2006 5:18 PM  
Blogger Deelze said...

You are the best.....

The voice audio adds a classic touch to it!

You should do more of them for your poetry!

~Smooches~

1/31/2006 5:34 PM  
Blogger blackcaesar said...

send me an email, telling me how you uploaded that please!!!! i want to do that too....

1/31/2006 7:27 PM  
Blogger Superstar Nic said...

The spoken words are even better!

1/31/2006 8:54 PM  
Blogger josie said...

that was nice. i like the reply. i dont usually come to this blog much but i think i will have to start.

1/31/2006 10:31 PM  
Blogger Diane S. said...

Incredibly beautiful Nikki.

Just incredible.

1/31/2006 11:21 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Nikki, you stay killin' it, that's what fire feels like.

2/01/2006 12:49 AM  
Blogger Rell said...

similar to what i amgine but not totally accurate.

still waiting...

2/01/2006 2:08 AM  
Blogger The Brown Blogger said...

you keep that up...

see what happens.

2/01/2006 7:11 AM  
Blogger MZPEACH said...

You voice is so pretty. I love it.

2/01/2006 11:32 AM  
Blogger Moose said...

nice one. good stuff!

2/09/2006 10:35 PM  
Blogger Guide_to_life said...

both poems are good poems...we all need to be in a cafe w/ the lights dim listening to that.....

2/13/2006 2:32 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very cool design! Useful information. Go on!
Staples stationery uk 84 brat part subaru Tenuate dospin price Buy didrex online next day air Tu perfume es el veneno order xenical online

1/28/2007 4:05 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home