Wednesday, February 15, 2006

it only takes seconds

before the ink
on this paper
has dried
another black man
mortally wounded
has died

before what i
just wrote has
been comprehended
the life of another
young brother
has ended

before you throw
down this poem
in disgust
a bullet has
torn through
another one's guts

five to ten seconds
three black men
are gone
imagine how many
had this been
a song?

6 Comments:

Blogger josie said...

this one was very good as well

2/16/2006 11:52 PM  
Blogger ms mimi the mocha soulchild said...

I like the way you used the poetry as a way to frame the issue. It makes it real to people.

4/08/2006 10:04 PM  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

PREACH and AMEN!!! You are one conscious sista.

8/16/2006 10:01 PM  
Blogger Don said...

TIGHT!

10/05/2007 7:43 PM  
Blogger bArOquE said...

how come i never saw this before...i cant imagine if it had been a song....maybe 17 by the time we are at the bridge

10/08/2007 4:35 AM  
Blogger Kiibaati said...

black on black is a sad fact

7/12/2008 5:24 PM  

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